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January 30, 2007
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Gold fierce eyes, coal course fur
Strength and speed for no escape
Long claws scraping the concrete
It's time to except your fate

This chase was done from the start
This creature rose with the night's sun,
With the blood red moon of tonight,
And now there is no where to run

Feed it's need for your flesh
Scream now, no one will come
Only fools walk when the sun sets
And few live of that small some

Go ahead, try to abscond, to flee
His towering form will be close behind
Maw gaping, black nose tracking
No safe place left for you to find

Simple mistake made this night
One with no fixing, my friend
For the werewulf rules this time
And for you, this is truly the end
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I like big puppies...

I had a need to write about one of my favorite creatures of the night... Don't be mad at how bad it is...
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:iconsintrepid:
Very nice poem here :D Kinda spooky o.o
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:iconsurron:
That's why it's under horror... And thanks. ^^
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:iconpoetoflore:
it is good, but the tenses kinda got to me a little bit
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:iconpoetoflore:
for what, oh lol dont be sorry . When you were using the word this instead of The it implyed the creature was you, because the rest of the poem was in a diferent tense i was just saying to use the word the, try to depersonalize it some, push it away from you
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:iconsurron:
I didn't realize I was saying it was me... Stupid English language confuses the heck out of at times like this...
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:iconpoetoflore:
well my English Prof. Said that society says there is a formal way to speak and write, then there is the dilect of the Middle class, slightly different but the same, as long as you get your point across the only thing that matters is you dont change the message, Ie Me instead of it
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:iconsurron:
So what one do I use?
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:iconpoetoflore:
well it depends on what the tenses are, perfect past present, past perfect lol the list goes on for awhile and it also depends on what message you mean to relay
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